How to Find the Hook in Your Book: A Practical Guide to Pitching and Promoting Your Book with Help from AIWhether you’re an author, publicist or small publisher trying to get media attention for a book, it all starts with one thing: the hook. Let’s be honest: not every book is going to get a feature in Good Weekend or land a primetime radio interview. Media outlets aren’t hanging around waiting for your press release to drop. They’re looking for stories—and not just any stories, but ones that hit a nerve, tap into the cultural mood, offer a surprising insight, or speak to a news moment already on the boil. So how do you make sure your pitch doesn’t fall flat? And how do you find the hook in your book—the one that makes a journalist pause and say, “Hmm, there’s something here”? Let’s talk about developing a great pitch, making your book matter, and using tools like ChatGPT to help you dig into the angles that media actually want. Why Your Pitch Might Be Failing (Don’t Take It Personally) First, the truth: most book pitches to media fail. Not because the book is bad, but because:
The good news? All of this is fixable. But only if you stop thinking like a marketer and start thinking like a journalist. What Is a Hook Anyway? The hook is not your book’s topic. It’s the angle that makes it interesting now. It’s what makes your story part of a bigger conversation or controversy. It’s “Women over 50 quitting corporate life to start again” — not “memoir about leaving my job.” It’s “how Aussie men are learning to talk about grief” — not “book about losing my dad.” It’s “what burnout really means for high-functioning execs” — not “leadership and wellbeing tips.” The hook gets you in the door. Your book can come later. Types of Hooks That Work (Especially in Australia) Journalists and producers want ideas that plug into bigger issues, including:
Using ChatGPT to Find Your Angle Let’s say you’re stuck. You know your book has something valuable to say, but you’re not sure how to shape it into a story that media will care about. Here are three ChatGPT prompts to help: Prompt 1: “Act like an Australian journalist. What are five current media angles or headlines that could be inspired by this book: [insert short book description here]?” → This gives you potential hooks based on current media trends. Prompt 2: “What are some talking points from this book that link to current issues in Australian society?” → Great for tying your book to newsworthy themes. Prompt 3: “I’m pitching a non-fiction book to ABC Radio. Give me five segment ideas or interview titles that would make a compelling on-air discussion.” → This can help you shape your pitch their way, not yours. You can also ask ChatGPT to roleplay a hostile producer and see where your pitch falls flat. It’s confronting—but helpful. Developing Talking Points that Stick Once you’ve got your hook, it’s time to nail your talking points. These aren’t summaries of your book. They’re short, sharp, quotable insights that show:
And please, don’t just say “this book is for everyone.” It’s not. Be specific. What Media Actually Want Producers and editors aren’t doing you a favour. They need good stories that speak to their audience. You’re there to help them do their job. Respect that. Your job is to:
The Hook is Your Key. Don’t Pitch Without It. If you haven’t found the hook, don’t send the pitch yet. You’ll burn the contact and waste your shot. Use AI to help you dig deeper. Ask colleagues. Ask a friend who listens to the ABC religiously. And yes, ask AI. It's a godsend for these sort of tasks. And even as a highly experienced marketer, ChatGPT and I are BFFs when it comes to this sort of stuff. Don't be afraid of it. Utilise it and embrace it. Struggling to Pitch Fiction, Poetry or Children’s Books? Still having problems with it? That’s okay. Not every book lends itself easily to a media hook—particularly fiction, poetry, or children's books. The news angle might be light, the themes subtle, or the author unknown. In those cases, you might need to pivot the pitch: focus on a personal story, a unique setting, a writing journey, or even the book’s visual appeal. Sometimes, the best you can do is make it charming, brief, and well-timed. For example, a children’s book on kindness might connect to World Kindness Day or school wellbeing programs. A novel set in a fictional coastal town could draw on the author’s regional ties or inspire a travel feature. And yes, there are times when publicists will pitch without a strong hook—because the author is Elizabeth Gilbert, or Sarah J. Maas has just breathed in a different direction and the fandom’s in meltdown. In those cases, media want the story before you even send the email. But for the rest of us, it pays to do the work—especially for non-fiction. The hook still matters. Even when it’s not obvious. RM Marketing Services provides outsourced marketing, sales and consulting support to publishers, distributors, and other organisations across the book industry.
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Why Publicity Isn’t the Only Question Distributors Should Be Asking |
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Here is an example of a fiction book, Symphony for the Man published by Spinifex Press (2020). It's a wonderful book about Harry who is homeless in Bondi and the girl who wants to write him a symphony. No surprise it's been optioned for film already...
Helpful tip: read it listening to Beethoven's Eroica Symphony.
As you can see, the B2L widget includes 30 pages of the story - setting the scene for both Harry and the nameless girl. Readers can then make a decision to purchase by clicking on links contained within the URL.
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Here's another example, this time for a highly illustrated non-fiction book on Australian Gin by David Box.
(Yes if you love Australian gin and want to learn more about it and our wonderul distilleries, buy the book, it's great!). This one has presented a few challenges as David is also the person behind the company Gintonica which sells Australian Gin. As you can see "reviews" for the book automatically picked up by SEO include his Gintonica products. We've left them there as we're big fans of his gin advent calendar. (And yes it's a thing, check it out at www.gintonica.com.au ) |
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One of the downsides to B2L is the rather limited number of websites they offer up as standard - particularly if you are in Australia and New Zealand. Of course they have Amazon, The Book Depository and Booktopia but we have a vibrant independent bookshop culture here who have a good online offering. As these logos don't come up automatically in B2L we endeavour to save our preferred bookshop logos, resized for B2L, and manually load them for each widget we create but this does take time, particularly if the logos are rectangle/too long for the available logo space in the platform.
We then put the shopping links in order as to the booksellers who have ordered stock or have it available to purchase. If an independent bookshop is doing a marvellous job marketing the books to their community, we put them higher up the scale to support their endeavours. If a chain bookseller has taken lots of stock, we take that into account as well. We provide readers with options - direct selling from the publisher's website, indies and chains. And yes we've had clients who don't want to list the almighty Amazon and those that want all the major sites to be listed. Find out the business philosophy and sales strategy that's right for you. Our one is to not limit sales avenues - an order is an order, make it easy for readers to buy your books, preferably with one click.
Book reviews
When you set up your B2L pre-publication you might not have reviews available but over time collate your URLs and add them to the widget. Another downside to the site is that you can't ATTACH a PDF of a review - it must be a URL and in the day of paywalls, that isn't a great experience for people wanting to read more about the book if the review requires a subscription to access.
Make sure you save your favourite quotes from a review and add them to your own product page - if selling directly from your site - use that URL as the primary link for the book when you set up shopping links. We always put the publisher's website first.
Over time the B2L site will pick up bits and pieces automatically to add to the reviews - it might be reader reviews from GoodReads or articles about the author in the mainstream media. You can actually use the tools on B2L to "fetch reviews" and can then manually add anything that hasn't been picked up via SEO. We try and check in our links every month or so for active titles.
Audio Files and Video Content
You can load audio files so if you've got an author reading an extract from the book, add it in the widget. Video content is also super helpful - and it's easy, grab your URL and include it in the relevant section. We put in book trailers for example.
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Embedding
Use the B2L navigation (three dots, upper left) select the Embed option to add a widget to your site. There are multiple options for embedding.
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- Double Page. This widget is by all means the biggest widget of the entire set and does a perfect job to have an actual impression of the real book or just too simply read a few paragraphs and then want more. We've used a double page in the examples previously provided for Symphony for the Man and Australian Gin.
- Single Page. This type of widget means exactly what it says. It’s the same Biblet but viewed per single page since some people do prefer to read/view this way.
- Icon Embed tag. This is B2L's smallest widget, also known as the Look Inside icon. Typically found on e-commerce websites. On clicking on this widget the Biblet opens (in a new browser tab). Example below.
- Widget Embed tag. B2L say it's perfect to embed on your website for, let's say, a book review. Example below.
The bulk of titles, at least for the major and second tier publishers, were imported from UK and/or US head office distribution centres who had a strong say on what was purchased for the ANZ market. Local publishing programs existed particularly in educational publishing, and publishers distributed their titles through their own warehouse, often attached to their building. Orders were phoned, faxed (faxes had recently arrived in the workplace!) and mailed through to customer service, reps took orders when they called on booksellers or at the annual book fair which alternated between Sydney and Melbourne. Basic Bibliographic data was entered into distribution systems manually so orders could be keyed by data entry staff. Price and availability enquiries were predominantly done via the phone lines. Wait times could be long at busy periods.
With regards to inventory: Buying in titles from overseas was done via catalogue information, published twice a year, with titles six months ahead of publication, and metadata which may or may not have been correct at the time of printing, rights information would always change. Textbooks were expensive (which has never changed) so academic publishers like Maxwell Macmillan where I first started my career would have an International Student edition printed, primarily out of Singapore, on cheaper paper and at a much cheaper price for students. We could price the books whatever we wanted to, marked up high for own margins. There was no goods and services tax. We would airfreight in a small number of copies for reps and marketing & publicity and the bulk came through ocean freight. It would take at least 3 months from the UK and 2 months from the US. If booksellers didn’t place their orders in a timely manner, they would not receive them for months unless they paid a special surcharge for us to air in. Orders to warehouses overseas were done every few weeks to consolidate. Everyone waited for their books. We were the only place they could get them. It was the norm.
With regards to marketing: Marketing was much simpler. We did A LOT OF MAILINGS! There was one computer for marketing staff who had to book it in advance in order to create price lists and order forms in Wordperfect. We often only had US marketing materials and naturally Australian booksellers wanted to have prices in AUD. Design departments would also grow with graphic designers using Apple’s Pagemaker and they would create promotional materials for us. Four colour printing for marketing was unheard of. We often used the photocopier and may have even used colour paper to make something look more presentable. By the late 90s we could sent to a printer using 1 colour ink. That was very exciting.
As there was of course no internet, we worked off US catalogues sometimes we wouldn’t find out we didn’t have the rights to sell a book in our region for months after we would take it to market – finding out only when we chased supply with our international warehouses or if a bookseller phoned us to say they had seen the same title from another publisher.
Review copies with media releases were posted out extensively. Sometimes you even used the fax to send out media alerts. You often didn’t know when something was reviewed unless a bookseller mentioned it on the phone to customer service or you heard or watched it firsthand. We paid clipping services - an expensive service that would scan the print media and send clippings of all the reviews. They were like gold in your hand.
Fast forward three decades to now....
You want to read the winner of the Booker prize which has just been announced on Twitter. Can’t access the print book? There is the option of immediately downloading the ebook when you purchase through Amazon, Apple, Kobo or see if it is available to borrow through your library through platforms like Overdrive, BorrowBox, Axis360. These digital suppliers are available via the web from your computer or through a handy app on your mobile device of choice. If it’s a scholarly book you would be looking for access through your university library. YOU expect access through the university library. And yes, you can now access etextbooks through vendors like Proquest and their Ebook Central Platform.
Publishers will either do their own distribution of ebooks and upload them to multiple sales partners directly via FTP or will outsource this to other providers. Ingram for example plays a core role in both ebook distribution as well as some of the larger print distribution warehouses like IPG in the US.
Many publishers have thriving local publishing programs. They make the decision locally as to what to import from their overseas offices and often do a local print run or format change rather than freighting books in – in this market we prefer trade paperbacks over the hardcovers for example. More often than not there are global release dates. Distributors of other publishers products release a month later when airfreight stock come in however others books that are not time sensitive still have a two month delay for their ocean freight to arrive to keep costs down. However they will have gone to market already with that title and have had some copies aired in.
Orders from booksellers are sent via edi. Others are scanned and sent via email. Faxes still exist but many publishers don’t have one anymore, but the distributors do they have to for the older booksellers who still use them. Key accounts will have electronic workflows so they receive edi notifications, electronic invoices, advance shipping notices, credits, statements etc.
Pricing of books has changed. The majority are overseas price converted plus GST (no markup as the customer will know – the customer is very savvy – the customer has the internet), some prices may even be cheaper than overseas however that presents problems for textbook publishers in particular who have a re-exportation issues which I won’t go into here.
Price and availability is only a phone call to a distributor as a last resort. Your first point of call as a bookseller is Titlepage – the web based APA initiative that has about 80% of the industry onboard. If booksellers can’t find it on Titlepage they will then open up Baker & Taylor’s database or Ingram’s ipage. You then Google it to try and find the publisher directly. There are still calls to distribution call centres but most of the correspondence they receive is via email, particularly re order management so there is a written trail of correspondence and requests from customers.
Booksellers don’t expect to wait for books. Ironically they can get overseas published books faster from the overseas wholesalers than from a local distributor. The way booksellers order has changed – smaller copies more frequently and of course expecting the publisher to have a consistent flow of stock to meet demand. They know they lost many consumers to Amazon and The Book Depository years ago so those booksellers who are still standing, and even thriving particularly independents and online, have to provide a high level of service locally for those that appreciate service above cost. It’s been estimated over many years that the Australian book market has lost between $200-300 million in sales to Amazon etc. I think it's more.
Bibliographic data is comprehensive. ONIX is the standard for disseminating that information. Nielsen and Bowker have core roles to play with title data and of course Nielsen has BookScan which has revolutionised the way publishers receive information about the sell-thru of their titles and those of their competitors. Salesforce and other CRMs keep tabs on customers and business development opportunities. For those that require training on resources or who are very remote there is the option of Webex or Skype for Business etc.
These days It’s about search and discovery. And the internet. And SEO. Don’t include an image and customers think it’s not available. No description. Customers will move on. Even the way publishers design their cover images has changed. They have to imagine how the cover looks like on the web and how to make it attractive (white covers are not practical unless they have interesting borders for example).
Pricing. Consumers are pricing savvy. They know how to search for cheap books. Booko for example will collate information from the web and show them the prices offered by online booksellers and chains.
So speed to market is critical. Competitive pricing and service are essential. These cost money but margins are being reduced on all sides in order to give the consumer what they want. What they demand. As without the customers everyone wouldn’t exist.
Marketing has changed dramatically. Database marketing and analytics mean we know more about the customer better from their online activities. We know what they read, what they click through to, what they purchase. At least online. We have Google Alerts and Google Analytics. We have Google fullstop!
Print promotional materials, particularly catalogues are less in demand, postage costs have almost disappeared as marketers have moved to email marketing. Marketing systems like Mailchimp, Marketo, Campaign Monitor, Constant Contact help profile customers and link into other systems effectively for better analytics. They are also free to a point. We have social media opportunities to explore all sides of publishing – Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, YouTube, Pinterest and others present different channels for sharing content, ideas and engagement – with authors, with consumers, with customers. Authors and author branding have become key in this online world as has genre marketing – sci-fi, romance and of course the big one YA.
Event marketing, writers festivals, conferences have provided more avenues to reach both an existing and potential customer base. With the rise and rise of Print on Demand and better options for short run printing, publishers can produce Advance Reading Copies, often unedited, to get booksellers and reviewers engaged early. For those that prefer ebook over print there is NetGalley. Get them talking about forthcoming books using new channels and sites like GoodReads. Create a buzz. Hashtag. #itsallaboutthebuzz
And when I say get “them” talking. I’m not talking about traditional book reviewers. The space in mainstream media for book reviewers has decreased. Literary editors predominantly review only books from the major publishers, with whom they have a direct relationship with their publicists. It’s the Instagrammers, The YouTubers “vloggers” that have social media influence and tens of thousands if not hundreds of thousands of followers who note their book recommendations. This is particularly strong in YA.
And of course we have multiple formats of products – print, ebook, online, app. Digital has presented many opportunities to exploit content. And marketing has had to accommodate in all the different channels and vendor partners to support sales and product development. Print and promotional marketing still has a role but it is digital marketing has seen the most investment and focus from publishers.
Author
Rachael McDiarmid has been in the Australasian book trade since 1990. Working in trade, academic and professional publishing as well as library supply and book distribution, she's worked with thousands of publishers, distributors, library vendors, and authors around the globe. She loves a belly laugh, strong coffee, wine, and good food. Venice is her favourite place in the world to visit but Sydney will always be home. She loves her office assistant Dash (also known as Dashie, Dashie Dog and the Little Shit). If you haven't already worked it out, she is known for her no bullshit approach.
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